Written feedback by a media student

Claudia Wingrove
Feedback:

Pros:

• The background music running on in the background was really affective, it created the right atmosphere and drew me into the film.
• the opening shots were very steady and ran off one another, which made everything to make sense.
• There was a clear semantic field of death 
• The cutting between each of the scenes was clear and ran smoothly.
• the voice over was full of emotion and help portray the appropriate feelings
• you made it hard to know which one of the guys would die because they both spoke about death, got me trying to guess!

Pos Criticism:

• Make sure that the flash of the hand especially is made a second longer this will help the audience to hold the image longer in their mind as it was quite quick
• The beginning did look a little bit like a trailer, so maybe make it shorter... but keep some of it in.
• Wasn't quite clear who the person who spoke over the shots was... a clairvoyant? a friend? the killer? although this may be showed later on then.

My Response To The Positive Criticism:

• It wasn't supposed to be clear who was in the voice over was, its supposed to make the audience think and make them confused, so i'm happy that it worked. 
• The beginning is there just to set the seen and crate and atmosphere.
• We looked into changing the flashed of the still images however when we looked at it being longer it gave too much away and we felt like it didn't fit into the opening right.