First showing of rough cut and feedback

Morgan did some editing at home and she showed her mum and we made some changes from this. For instance we changed the original shot of Corey dying as it was weak and as we didn't have any fake blood at the time and it didn't look very effective, or even look like he'd died. We made sure to make changes of this so we re-filmed it. Also her mum talked about the music and how it would be better if we added ticking clock noises in the background so that it looked like his time was running out. She also recommended that we add more/ better shots of the fortune telling cards so we re-filmed it and added it in.